In last blog, I just mentioned that I went to the writing center yesterday and I think it’s helpful.
The writing center does have a lot of materials, when I said that I have some problem with the introduction, the TA give me a sheet which describes how to write the introduction immediately. The sheet introduces several ways to start the introduction and end it. What’s more, there also has the hard copy of the MLA Document Style References. It’s much easier to find out the correct way to do the citation than looking from the internet.
The TA is really nice. She read my paper carefully and pointed out my deficiencies carefully. Before I talk with her, I really don’t know whether my introduction did well or not. My introduction was consisted with two paragraphs, the first part talks about that student should also focus on the society like labor market, and therefore, people may find out the conflict between employees and companies. Then I provide two small negative examples. The TA told her feeling about the introduction; make me have more sense about my introduction. After heard her suggestion, I decided to delete almost the first graph, and let the two examples be the main part of the introduction since it may be more attractive and powerful.
I told the TA that I have to problem to use the right word, then she look quiet carefully on the word choosing. Like the word “contradiction”; it’s an incompatibility between two or more statements, ideas, or actions. But I thought it wrong. The TA points out the problem, compare the several words on the Webster’s website, and choose the appropriate one.
During the one hour, the TA gave me a lot of suggestion, and almost all of them is very useful for me to write the paper.
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