Tuesday, February 8, 2011

# 35 CP(2)

      The article I read today is called “Fat and Happy”, seems like a lot of person read this article yesterday. So I choose to read it today. Fat is a really sensitive word to many girls. It seems like losing weight is just the popular topic among women since a lot of female suffer a lot in order to become slim and to be looked more beautiful. However, being overweight is not the problem of looking terribly, but also a essential factor to be unhealthy.
      The statement of the article is that obesity has become a serious problem among children all over the world, and parents and adults should set a good example to those kids and let them realize the important to keep fit.
     I think the article is timely since corpulence is absolutely an epidemic issue throughout the world. And the big rate of obesity among children makes the topic more seriously. Overweight can be a cause of death, the author points out that fat children may even have a shorter life than their parents. As a result, obesity of children should really be noticed by the society.
     The article is also compelling since the evidence in that is persuasive. And the highlight sentence: “But you might say to yourself, I’m not obese, I don’t have children, and it’s out of my control and doesn’t pertain to me. That’s where you’re wrong.” make people begin to concern about this problem.
      Finally, this essay is relevant. In the front part of the article, the author discuss about the situation of fatness among children and how this would affect their and their parents’ life. And in the last several paragraphs, the author points out that adult should be the example of children to teach them to keep fit and healthy. It’s everyone’s responsibility to take care of the world’s future by solve the obesity problem.

1 comment:

  1. I just feel like gaining too much weight since I came to America, but I am just too lazy to work out. I really need to start eating healthy and do some work out.

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