#42 RELEVANT

Being relevant to the ideal readers is also an important requirement to an article.

I think the statement of my article has many connections to readers. Since my topic is about how the technology used in video games affect people nowadays, both teenagers and adults may pay attention to that.

     In parents’ sight, video games are always bad for children since they made kids obsessed on these games and give up their study. Admittedly, this point of view is true; many students spent too much time on video games instead of sleep and study. However, video games nowadays are not just a way for kids to have fun or get rid of the homework.

     With the more and more vivid frame and feeling, it’s much easier to stimulate kid’s creation. What’s more, since the game required movements and gestures, the game becomes more and more realistic. So the video console is relevant to parents and kids.

     What’s more, the new video game console is becoming a new method to do exercise. Since keep fit is also a prevalent topic, the whole worlds are figuring out the special to do exercise. With the help of new video console, people can also work out without the playground and complex equipments, but also retain the same consequent. Like boxing, tennis and dancing, people can burn the great amount of calories by playing this game. As a result, these video consoles are also related to those people who want to lose weight or keep fit.

     Lastly, video games like Wii and Xbox 360 have become the new method for friends gather around. Since the skills of previous games limit the number of player, it’s almost impossible for a lot friends enjoy the same game concurrently. However, thanks to the development of technology, video game consoles can gather friends together and bring a lot of joy.