# 33 Blog about my paper

      Finally, I finished my paper!!! 8 pages！！It may be the longest paper I have ever written. The process is torturing, but I feel really released when I submit it to the drop box. However, I’m not satisfied with what I’ve written since I thought there are still a lot of problems need me to deal with.

      First of all, I hesitate about my argument for a long while. I didn’t make my mind decisively. So the arguments in my blog, episode analysis, and draft are always changing. Next time, I will decide the topic and stick on it.

      Secondly, I’m not sure whether my evidences are persuasive enough. I think my examples are not scholarly enough. It’s too difficult to find academic examples from the internet. Maybe I look for the resources from the wrong direction and method. I think I will find the time to the library to ask for some help.

      Thirdly, about the MLA style. Admittedly, it’s the first time for me to write a paper in MLA style. Maybe there are lots of rules about MLA, but I’m too unfamiliar with it. Last time I went to the Writing Center, I knew some rules about the MLA, I will practice more in the future. And I feel I have some problem about citation. I can’t point out the kind of my resource is, so I can’t find the right way to cite my resource. I’m really annoying about it.

      This draft has a lot of problems, but I’ll try my best to improve it.